Sometimes somewhere in the dark,
my shadow tries hard to leave a mark.
Free were my thoughts, free was my soul
Passionate voice always striving for a goal
honesty in my work gave me right orientation
motivation was guided by self-determination
Sweating removes salt and brings only sweetness
This was the concrete base of my preparedness.
Gone are the days when there was perseverance
Time actually makes it difficult to keep adherence.
Self-centric human always desiring to fulfil greed
would suddenly disappear when u will be in need
Shaken is my belief , faith is also under suspicion
but sincere efforts demand a lot of precision.
Exhausted I feel while maintaining this pace
my reflection questions- Am I lost in the race!!
my shadow tries hard to leave a mark.
Free were my thoughts, free was my soul
Passionate voice always striving for a goal
honesty in my work gave me right orientation
motivation was guided by self-determination
Sweating removes salt and brings only sweetness
This was the concrete base of my preparedness.
Gone are the days when there was perseverance
Time actually makes it difficult to keep adherence.
Self-centric human always desiring to fulfil greed
would suddenly disappear when u will be in need
Shaken is my belief , faith is also under suspicion
but sincere efforts demand a lot of precision.
Exhausted I feel while maintaining this pace
my reflection questions- Am I lost in the race!!
8 comments:
This is my favourite...Powerful and heartfelt poem.And the last line "my reflection questions- Am I lost in the race!!" Very impactfull... Straight from the soul. You have fought hard, I hope and I know you will continue fighting.
Thanks a lot
nice poem..a combo of first hard work sweat determination and other then reflection of delayed outcomes..people disappear..introspection..self doubts..a good one.. whenever one wins race, one is winner...though u r already a champ..nothing to prove :)
Wow..nice line..Love this
Nice lines
Strong words..loved the lines
Loved it..valuable lines..
Nic lines
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