Dreams and goals faded in the blue
Trying to find something really new
Lost n puzzled mind walking on the dew
Searching someone from the list of few
Drizzling in the night shook off my mind
Shaking hands removed the cover of blind
Falling tears clearing vision to see the kind
Shady n suspicious image of none I find
Faded sky faded I brought in all the cup of emptiness
Change of a season, change of reason needed to fill this bowl of hollowness!!!
Trying to find something really new
Lost n puzzled mind walking on the dew
Searching someone from the list of few
Drizzling in the night shook off my mind
Shaking hands removed the cover of blind
Falling tears clearing vision to see the kind
Shady n suspicious image of none I find
Faded sky faded I brought in all the cup of emptiness
Change of a season, change of reason needed to fill this bowl of hollowness!!!
11 comments:
It has depth. 😶
There is a great poet inside Mansi.. Great. Fingers crossed🤞 👍
Very nicely written. Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as well as the strucutre. Amazing Job. Keep up the outstanding work.
perfectly crafted... 👍👍
Lost n puzzled mind walking on the dew
Searching someone from the list of few...
You don't need to-
you have line of thoughts , continue to grew
N it's not common in my large view!!!
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Falling tears clearing vision to see the kind
Shady n suspicious image of none I find...
There always a appreciator to your behind
It is clearly defined n I will rewind
Trust me…
You been designed to be always a headlined!!
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Change of a season, change of reason needed to fill this bowl of hollowness!!!
To be honest I dint get you :p
Deep thoughts or I blew..
Please write more n continue
Till then adieu!!!
Bowl of hollowness..
poem brimming with emotion!
Can feel the emptiness behind the words... Keep trying... U will succeed..
i hope wid change of season..u start afresh :)
Awesome
Yh unknown kon h
Awesome,
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