Friday, 10 March 2017

Phantasy or the reality


Is this  a FANTASY??


Oh my dear lord, Is this beautiful world created by you- a truth or just a fantasy?-
In this life, We pass through good or bad times but still respect your supremacy.

Each and every moment of life nourishes our inner soul with a new learning
Whatever the situation, we stand up again to make a phenomenal beginning.

We care, we love, we belief, we fear to loose someone very close and try to be kind
Is this a fantasy as not even a single thing belong to us – the answer we need to find

Here only, a man turn selfish,  perform wrong deeds and make intolerable disruptions
Doesn’t he know the earth can help grow plants but also a source of volcanic eruption

Is he ignorant about the reality of the world- this is the question roaming in my mind
How can he fight for the things he never owned, spread violence and  just turn blind
How can missiles, weapons and things creating havoc be a source for attaining peace.
As only noise is generated on their application, so war is something deadly than disease.

Need to realise the mysterious secret of the universe and abandon all these deviltry.
Only misery n misery would be the end , so start early n knock the door of a monastery.

Dear God, reveal the hidden truth to my brothers and show them the path of enlightenment.
Help them to reorient themselves and perform acts for each n everyone’s betterment.


29 comments:

Unknown said...

Nice thought mast poem πŸ˜πŸ˜„

Dhiraj kumar said...

Beautiful poem and I salute u...

Unknown said...

covering quite a few dimensions....well done mansi :)

Savita koul said...



All the wonderful cosmic manifestations are existing by the supreme will of God. As we generally say, not a blade of grass moves without the will of the Supreme Personality of God. everything is moving under HIS will:  being created,  being maintained, and being annihilated by HIS will.

HE is the Director and we are the actors of the whole drama.

Savita koul said...



All the wonderful cosmic manifestations are existing by the supreme will of God. As we generally say, not a blade of grass moves without the will of the Supreme Personality of God. everything is moving under HIS will:  being created,  being maintained, and being annihilated by HIS will.

HE is the Director and we are the actors of the whole drama.

Unknown said...

Insightful...

suresh said...

In the air,with each breeze
I am here to feel at ease
Look deep inside your heart
I m there with all arts.

I made the world for your deeds
I enrich the soil for your needs
Nothing is hidden from you O dear
Feel me you at everywhere.


I give you  the lights of just
You entered in world of lust
Come forward and let embrace
I am there for you to grace.

Unknown said...

Very nice post !!!

Well written covering lots of thoughts !!!!

Mansi koul said...

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Nidhi koul said...

Good and bad times resemble the two sides of the same coin (inseparable).its the bad time only that will make u feel how imp the good time is and gives u ability to retain it.we just need to remain stiff in all the situations and play the game that God wants us to be part of.

Every time I go through your blog, it makes me feel proud to have a sister like you.

Unknown said...

Words filled with reality...

Nidhi koul said...

Good and bad times resemble the two sides of the same coin (inseparable).its the bad time only that will make u feel how imp the good time is and gives u ability to retain it.we just need to remain stiff in all the situations and play the game that God wants us to be part of.

Every time I go through your blog, it makes me feel proud to have a sister like you.

Sushant Sharma said...

We all know how life can be beautiful and cruel at the same time..
People like you brings us true fantasy in a good rhyme..

I won't repeat people admiration of your poem or classic write
I am just lucky to walk through your work - it was absolutely bright n right
When will be your next piece will come - I am waiting n sitting tight:)

Mansi koul said...

Thanks Sushant πŸ˜„
You can check my old collection ..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Unknown said...

Thoughtful..You simply rock ��

Mansi koul said...

😍😘

Mansi koul said...

πŸ˜„πŸ˜

Unknown said...

Mansi, you are genius, I must say and you proved me right by writing the poem that way!

Mansi koul said...

Thanks a lot Vivek :)

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Mansi koul said...

Sry .I didn't recognise u

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