Thursday, 17 November 2016

Inner voice:

 A little ignorant girl made her appearance in the lively cosmos.
Some felt very happy; others cried as if there was a huge loss.
Anguish over her birth, began to be seen as a flowerless moss.

Propagation of hatred and bitterness spoiled her childhood.
In the clutches of patriarchal society, she found nothing good.
Inferiority complex made her remain hidden under the hood.

Lost her inner strength, forgot herself with the growing ages,
Her conscience began to ask why there are invisible cages.
Demoralized and debile, started a tale with all empty pages.

An-serine act of society delivered a feeble woman with no right.
Shackled but thrown away to face what was beyond her sight.
Unlearned n nescient lacked strength to make a healthy fight.


Male chauvinism becoming a reason for discriminating few
Stand and raise a loud voice to oppugn the orthodox view
let prejudices die hard , gain lost strength and  start a new...

20 comments:

Unknown said...

You proved the caliber girl can have and you being an example.

Unknown said...

I can completely visualize you writing this.. Superb job sweetheart..its awe-inspiring ☺😍

Urma..:) said...

Nicely written. 😊👍

Urma..:) said...

Nicely written. 😊👍

Nidhi said...

Well done my girl.😍.you always make me feel proud as u always go the extra mile n proove to be a real eager beaver

Unknown said...

Nice work mansi, keep it up :)

Mansi koul said...

Thanks everyone:)

Rudresh said...

Well written!! Keep it up..

Savita koul said...

Male chauvinism is just a "Belief"
Women like you will always be the "Chief" 

Mansi koul said...

😍😘

Swanti Vashishtha said...

Well written di......

Unknown said...

Heart touching ... simply superb

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Mansi koul said...

:) :)

Unknown said...

Nice one yaar

Unknown said...

Truth in such a simple language. Only you can do that..... Keep it up
.

Dhiraj kumar said...

U r the real chap.... Ur thoughts shows that u deserve this..

Sushant Sharma said...

You took charge , may take us to some hope
Written in short, I must say I see here some scope

Couldn't figured out what to say or what to write
But for sure , your piece is priceless- very word is so right

I may develop a habit in following you every day
but for sure I will start with saying - hey!!

Mansi koul said...

Thanks 😀😀

Unknown said...

Superb post of "Inner voice:"

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