Monday, 30 July 2012

A BIG OH!!...TO MY INDIA(search for revolutionist)



trembling hands knocking the window,
awaiting for a penny to preserve their shadow 


fighting with tides, no fear in their minds
hopeful eyes, searching for a kind


time of their nourishment with knowledge,
but palpitating feet seeking for a privilege


bewildering, aiding hands lost in the race ,
fond nobody to make a grin on their face  


perplexing,the context is not of a meagre pity,
as its not enough to remove reigning mendicity


something definitely queer from this land,
alarming for the time to tighten the band 


flying minds satisfying their own needs ,
left with none to sow a revolutionary seed 


everyone indulged in their own pride ,
no one to preserve the flickering side


continuing, with a sign of connotation ,
move ahead to remove the state of pauperisation

11 comments:

Rishi Prakash said...

Nice Lines,Nice Rhyming ....

Unknown said...

is it by you???

Mansi koul said...

@dharam : ya its by me...

@rishi thanks :)

Priyanka Sharma said...

heart touching lines..........:)
nice 1

Mansi koul said...

@pinky : thanku dear

ViVeK BhAt said...

awesome yaar...gud keep it up

Mansi koul said...

@vivek bhat
hey..thanks :) :)

Unknown said...

Indeed philanthropic... In hope of better tomorrow!

Unknown said...

I luv this one. this is so real and beatifully written. U go Girl!!

Jagpreet Singh Anand said...

Itni Angrezi???? Bhaisaab!!

Bdw.. Beautiful thoughts wrapped up in even more beautiful lines!!

Suraj Raina said...

Wow! What an expression.